The Weight of Souls by Bryony Pearce

16006117The Weight of Souls by Bryony Pearce
Publisher Strange Chemistry
Length350 pages
Genera: Paranormal
SubjectsCurses, High School, Romance, Murder, Mystery
How I obtained the bookNetgalley, eArc

Rating: 

Sixteen year old Taylor Oh is cursed: if she is touched by the ghost of a murder victim then they pass a mark beneath her skin. She has three weeks to find their murderer and pass the mark to them – letting justice take place and sending them into the Darkness. And if she doesn’t make it in time? The Darkness will come for her…

She spends her life trying to avoid ghosts, make it through school where she’s bullied by popular Justin and his cronies, keep her one remaining friend, and persuade her father that this is real and that she’s not going crazy.

But then Justin is murdered and everything gets a whole lot worse. Justin doesn’t know who killed him, so there’s no obvious person for Taylor to go after. The clues she has lead her to the V Club, a vicious secret society at her school where no one is allowed to leave… and where Justin was dared to do the stunt which led to his death.

Can she find out who was responsible for his murder before the Darkness comes for her? Can she put aside her hatred for her former bully to truly help him?

And what happens if she starts to fall for him?

There isn’t really much going for this book other than the premise. Dude, how awesome is the idea of a girl cursed by ghosts to hunt murderers? For some reason though, Pearce thought it a better idea to make Taylor’s social life the main point of the book instead of I don’t know, her curse.

Brilliant, just brilliant. Yes, that’s a perfect idea. Focus on high school, because obviously that’s going to attract more YA readers who can’t read books without a huge focus on high school.

*sigh*

While, sure we do get some time focusing on the curse, most of the book doesn’t pay much attention to it. I really only read the book because of the awesome sounding plot and Pearce does a very poor job of keeping it the center of attention. Instead it gets piled under loads of unnecessary bits and pieces that detract from the overall book. I don’t get it. Why would you bog down your murder mystery with an boring drama and angst?

It honestly seemed like, that even though there was a lot resting on this, Taylor really didn’t care too much about finding Justin’s murderer. She seemed more interested in his pretty body to be honest. It was more of something she had to do at some point but it didn’t really matter when. If it took a while, she would basically shrug her shoulders and say “c’est la vie”.

Taylor, gurl, you do realise you, the main character, don’t even care about your own plot? At all? I don’t think that’s how it usually works but okaaay…

Like I said, Pearce focuses so much of her efforts into building drama and angst that the curse is largely underdeveloped. We are given the bare bones to work with and are basically left to speculate about the rest. There is some backstory but it’s presented in such a way that it makes it a chore to read through and I, like many others, really just skimmed or skipped these parts.

The Weight of Souls isn’t an entirely bad book. The main character, Taylor, is actually pretty cool. She’s one of those fun narrators that aren’t really amazing but just keep the book going and you reading. Taylor is pretty level headed and actually, fairly intelligent.

Before I end this review, I have to mention two things: Justin the asshole and the ‘illusive super secret organisation’ that is part of the mystery for a long time.

Justin the asshole is this guy who’s died and now he’s a ghost who refuses to acknowledge this. He’s also, *gasp*, the love interest. You’re so surprised, I know. Who would have guessed right? Well, he’s also the guy who bullied Taylor for years. You know, the guy who sent his goons after her. The goons harassed her and called her horrible things all under the blessing of this Justin guy.

Yeah, really romantic backstory.

Somehow, when someone bullies you, it means that they have a crush on you. Yes, friends, every bully that will ever bully you is actually someone who has a huuuge crush on you and you’ll end up living happily ever after.

What? No. That’s not how it works. Bullying ≠ Crush nor will it ever. Romanticizing bullying is absolutely horrible and should not be accepted.

The second thing is much less atrocious, and more humourous.

I’m going to try and not spoil anything but basically this extremely powerful club is a bunch of kids doing dares and having sleep overs. But not just any dares, *whispers* bad boy dares. Oh yeah, they’re doing big kid dares. So. Scary.

There is a lot of unexplored potential in this book that really just went to waste. The Weight of Souls could have been so much more if certain aspects were fleshed out a bit more and others given a more minor role. Overall, The Weight of Souls was a huge disappointment. While it wasn’t completely unenjoyable, it wasn’t very good either. I don’t really recommend this book to anyone.

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2 thoughts on “The Weight of Souls by Bryony Pearce

  1. Heartless Lyn says:

    That is the downside of YA fiction – the high school drama crap. Some books are very good about avoiding it, but most authors feel that it is necessary to make it feel more teen-like.

    I have this on my Kindle. Now I’m not so sure about it.

    • Lisbeth Avery says:

      Yeah, it’s a huge downfall. I don’t get why authors feel the need to add it in. I know some people like it and that’s great, but I really don’t think every teen wants high school in every single book we read. :\

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